02-04-2004, 12:25 AM
I say this story was short, to the point and interesting enough to keep the reader's interest. What's most important is there was good character development in the beginning without a lot of fluff. By the end, you knew what the guy looked, smelled and probably sounded like. Way better than the typical Jays story.
Bravo, GS. Bravo.
Bravo, GS. Bravo.