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So i've been writing a little lately... - Anyone want to share?
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Or maybe I just posted this so I could read more of Gonzostyle's stuff. Big Grin and I know many of you can write, so I need a little inspiration

Here's something I've been working on the last few days...trying to make a song for it but I just can't think of a chorus:

The earth stops for a moment
I feel it's pulse slow
Keep on walking forward
though I have nowhere to go

Nature's forces pull me
My consciousness flies
A chance for adventure?
Didn't let it pass by
(chorus)

Standing at my crossroads
The air breathes, sighs
Lost in the wonder
Held in land and sky

A new feeling, building
Deep inside of me
Comfort, a warm embrace,
green is all I see
(chorus)

I sense the world change
Like it's shutting the door
But I just want to stay here
One moment more

A journey lies ahead
Will I find out my fate?
Then will I return
to this wondrous state?
(chorus)
<center>In the 60's people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.</center>
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